Performance of Piano Sonata No. 1 in C-

Hello all,

I wrote this Piano Sonata some 7 years ago, and I recently decided to have it recorded. It is just something I've always wanted to get done, as I never felt the piece was truly finished until hearing it on a proper acoustic piano. Here is a video of pianist Jorian Van Nee performing the work in its entirety on a beautifully restored Bechstein grand. I've included the score for you to follow along if you wish.

This Sonata explores the realms of nostalgia, love, and the magic of youthful summertime. The Sonata is a derivative work as it draws its opening theme from a very short tune known as "The Roost," which gained popularity in the video game "Animal Crossing: Wild World," composed by Kazumi Totaka. I recall specifically choosing this tune when starting the composition of the piece not only for the pianistic nature of it, but also as I felt it to be the anthem of one particular summer in my life above all; and I vividly remember playing Wild World during that summer. After introducing Totaka's theme, I try to develop and expand upon it, crafting an original 25 minutes of material thereafter.

I really must commend Jorian on his efforts for this piece. Looking back at my score from 7 years ago, it is far from perfect, yet he worked with it and interpreted the piece wonderfully, alongside navigating all the technical challenges the piece presents with ease.

If you're short on time, I recommend movement 3, as for me personally, it has the most gravitas. - Begins at 18:36 in the video

 

Acknowledged shortcomings of the work:

-Seeing as how this is what I'd consider an "older work" of mine, I do not feel it is truly indicative of my personal style, nor does it display efforts and progress I've made thereafter in my studies of composition in general, but I am still proud of it despite the fact that I acknowledge it is not the most innovative piece of music.

-In hindsight, there are certainly some pastiche moments, notably, a lot of Beethoven influence.

-The main theme and overall harmonic language are a bit trite, and many may frown at a theme that starts in the all-too-cliché sounding rising 6ths, but maybe it can still be enjoyable. At least I have an excuse in this situation as I did not write the opening theme.

-The score has many, many things I'd have corrected in writing this now, but Jorian felt comfortable working with it as it stood, so here it stands.

Sonata No. 1 in C Summer Love Full Score.pdf

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  • Counter-recommendation: DO NOT skip movements 1&2. For me this is excellent piano writing graced with a superb performance. This pushed all the right buttons for me, including that at times it seemed improvisational. I loved that it drifted to the boundary of chaos but came right back to normalcy, which in the context of this work, is a fantasia. Please tell Jorian that his commitment to your work was evident in his convincing and joyful expression of it.

    I looked at the score before starting the video. Less than a minute into the video I thought the music/performance was so strong that the visual would be be distracting, so I listened for 25 minutes with the screen turned off. Bravo, bravo. -Ray
    • Thank you very much Ray for giving this a go. Your kind words about the piece are great to hear, and I'm glad you were able to handle some of the heavy shifts between chaos and stability in the work. I've always felt it might be a little 'too much' for some listeners. Hope you're well
  • Did the performance change your mind about this composition? Are the parts you weren't sure about now satisfactory to you?
    • Hi Rowy,

      That's an interesting question; it did make me think a little. Despite the strength of Jorian's performance and interpretation of the piece, I'm not entirely convinced that it 'fixes' my perceived reservations and shortcomings about the piece. I believe these issues are inherent to the writing itself. While some of the abrupt transitions and shifts in tone are smoothed out by the natural rubato and phrasing in the performance, I still feel that the performance cannot fully alleviate most of the shortcomings I personally identified in the piece. Of course, of those I listed, they're subjective, others may not consider them shortcomings.
      • Thanks, David.
        • Rowy- you asked a great question. I was looking forward to hearing David’s response to it.
  • there's a hint of "methinks thou dost protest too much" here in the various excuses. If you really don't think much of the opening theme (and I suspect this was rather tongue-in cheek) then you could have written your own. Anyway, I found a good deal to enjoy here. The freewheeling fantasy for the most part works very nicely (just possibly the second movement slightly outstays its welcome) and there are any number of beautiful and fanciful moments, played absolutely admirably. Which makes me interested in what is typical of your current style?
    • Hey David, thanks for checking it out! Just to give you a hard time, I only indicated that I suspected others might find the opening theme and overall language trite. I'm certainly not speaking for anyone specifically, but just expressing a broad suspicion that some might immediately be turned off by a theme that leans on rising sixths in a somewhat commonplace fashion. You are correct in that I resonate with the theme and rather enjoy it; otherwise, making a Sonata out of it would have been an odd yet interesting idea in the irony of doing so. In terms of my current style, I suppose I am trying to find a harmonic language that is unique in the way I personally employ it, alongside it being abstract yet easily accessible. There likely is not such a thing that will satisfy everyone, but some sort of compromise is ideally what I'm after. The next piece that I hope to release, after it is recorded, will communicate this intention better than I can try to through words. Alongside that, the Beethovenian and Romantic influence in this piece is quite prominent. While I still find it enjoyable and feel this has some originality and unique ideas inserted at times, I do not see it as the best or most unique expression of myself that I can come up with.
      • I think any work is bound to have some cliches in it -- after all if your rising 6th's are effective then what does it matter. And for those composers who try to completely reinvent the wheel, the language may be so obscure (and possibly pretentious) that that is in itself arguably a cliche! My work is full of romantic cliches but they're nevertheless somehow different from the cliches of others. And there is no point in trying to please everyone -- the greatest works in musical literature such as the late Beethoven quartets or Bruckner symphonies are only appreciated by a tiny minority of the population.
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    • Thank you for taking the time to listen and share your thoughts Jon. It is much appreciated.
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