It's been a while since I've posted anything on here (blame the inspirational block!). Just to say how important and valued feedback from others is on music. It's funny how sometimes you know that something isn't quite right with the composition you're working on, but you think..."Ah, it'll pass" and then someone picks up on the very point you know hasn't been given your 100%! It's very much appreciated though and after this happens, it gives you the push you need to tackle the issue head on! It's good to be 'pushed' and encouraged by your peers! This happened to me very recently and so I've gone back to the drawing board and given the piece I'm working on a fresh lick of paint and a new name; Rain
It's not 'there' yet, but much more on my way now. I think I posted the orignal version on my page a while ago.
Check it out this and the original on my page.Also link here: Rain