Rafael Andres Diaz's Page

"No, this the first time I post this one this Forum. "

"I believe you are right, Claude. what gives?"

"This sounds familiar... Have you posted it before on this forum?"

"Well.... In all fairness a lot of these are proofreading omissions not so much "rules"... Hence my comment."

"Whoa, another "should we follow the rules" quagmire! Let me just say that counterpoint to me is a misery (I mean mystery)  of the highest order. I have no idea how this would actually sound with real voices singing real words. But I…"

"Brilliant! I might have to ask you to look at my stuff one day..."

"Here are my comments  regarding the theoretical errors in your composition that I found: (m = Measure) m3-4: Parallel octaves S & B "Ave Ma..." m5: No A in Gra (S) m7-8: Parallel octaves S & T "Do-mi...: m8: The normal…"

"Yes, agree with Ingo, you've done very well. But I'm unsure what kind of feedback and the overall effect you want, like is it meant to be traditional-sounding or modern. It sounds a mix of both here through the way you've harmonised…"

"Hi Rafael, welcome to the forum.  Your piece has a very nice sound and your score is easy to read, I think you have done very well in your first year.  If you haven't already done so you might consider working with binary and ternary…"