Roger Garcia replied to thomas williams's discussion New orchestral song
"It feel very electronic and cinematic. Perhaps something written for a video game sequence? It would fit well in that category!"
Nov 18, 2013
Rodney Carlyle Money replied to thomas williams's discussion writers block
"Now write the greatest melody ever written on top of that dang ostinato!
~Rod"
Nov 12, 2013
thomas williams replied to thomas williams's discussion writers block
"you guys have given me a couple of ideas of what i should do next. thanks for the help i really appreciate it :D"
Nov 12, 2013
Gene Alley replied to thomas williams's discussion writers block
"Tom, you could abruptly bring the last section of ostinatos to a halt, contrast it with a quieter section for 8 bars with either  high woodwinds or a F horn(s) in the upper register, then build back to the intensity of the ostinato from first…"
Nov 12, 2013
Tyler Hughes replied to thomas williams's discussion writers block
"It sounds like you got caught in an ostinato loop. You found a groove that you like but now caught looping that groove. 
Try working from the end then later bridging the gap. It will help you get more insight as to how to get out of that loop. "
Nov 11, 2013
thomas williams replied to thomas williams's discussion my second orchestral song
"thanks for the feedback raymond i can see what you mean. it need more and some unpredictable procession line or something ill bear it in mind ty :)"
Oct 18, 2013
thomas williams replied to Julien's discussion My first epic soundtrack track
"i really like that love the procession my feedback.
1) add more parts at the moment it goes A,B maybe add a C part for an intense build up and go back to A so it goes A, B, C, A. 

2) add more to the low notes like a cello and/or bass and bassoon.…"
Oct 18, 2013
thomas williams replied to thomas williams's discussion my second orchestral song
"thanks for the feedback and sure ill have a listen to your 
thanks again :)"
Oct 18, 2013
Julien replied to thomas williams's discussion my second orchestral song
"Here are the things I noticed you could improve:
- I would give the piano in the intro way more reverb and maybe more pedal, I think that would relay the darkness a lot more
- When the snare drum hits fast, you might wanna try a snare roll sample as…"
Oct 18, 2013

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