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"It feel very electronic and cinematic. Perhaps something written for a video game sequence? It would fit well in that category!"
"Now write the greatest melody ever written on top of that dang ostinato!
~Rod"
~Rod"
"you guys have given me a couple of ideas of what i should do next. thanks for the help i really appreciate it :D"
"Tom, you could abruptly bring the last section of ostinatos to a halt, contrast it with a quieter section for 8 bars with either high woodwinds or a F horn(s) in the upper register, then build back to the intensity of the ostinato from first…"
"It sounds like you got caught in an ostinato loop. You found a groove that you like but now caught looping that groove.
Try working from the end then later bridging the gap. It will help you get more insight as to how to get out of that loop. "
Try working from the end then later bridging the gap. It will help you get more insight as to how to get out of that loop. "
"thanks for the feedback raymond i can see what you mean. it need more and some unpredictable procession line or something ill bear it in mind ty :)"
"i really like that love the procession my feedback.
1) add more parts at the moment it goes A,B maybe add a C part for an intense build up and go back to A so it goes A, B, C, A.
2) add more to the low notes like a cello and/or bass and bassoon.…"
1) add more parts at the moment it goes A,B maybe add a C part for an intense build up and go back to A so it goes A, B, C, A.
2) add more to the low notes like a cello and/or bass and bassoon.…"
"thanks for the feedback and sure ill have a listen to your
thanks again :)"
thanks again :)"
"Here are the things I noticed you could improve:
- I would give the piano in the intro way more reverb and maybe more pedal, I think that would relay the darkness a lot more
- When the snare drum hits fast, you might wanna try a snare roll sample as…"
- I would give the piano in the intro way more reverb and maybe more pedal, I think that would relay the darkness a lot more
- When the snare drum hits fast, you might wanna try a snare roll sample as…"
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