"very very good, I enjoyed ths a lot, more of it I say!"

"Thanks for your input, sorry it took me so long to get back, been away, I understand your comments and have left this particular piece for now with a view to going back and rewriting the voices.
Thanks again

Peter Maslyn said:Hi Si, I really like…"

"Hi Si, I really like the piano, and the bass movements, though I am no expert but I think what Ario suggested is quite right as the soprano leaps between the lower and higher notes, avoiding contrasts. Very good though."

"The soprano sounds okay... I would just put a "bridge" inbetween the lower and higher notes, avoiding the contrast between the notes, by taking from the size of the leaps...

I'm not even sure, if all notes can be sung by one person (even a…"

"Yes sorry, it does not mean much, I wanted to write a simple piece of music that just loops with some airy sopprano, but I feel stuck with this and would like to do something more with it, I just wondered what other people thought, I,ve never…"

"" a repetative cyclic piece"
could you explain it a bit more?"