What have you composed for? Or what medium do you work around?
Film, Orchestra, Big Ensemble
"William,
Nice, but I would avoid the dominant 7th chords. Clear it up a bit by opening up the voicings and change the harmonic structure (slightly) but not enough to change the static fell of the piece."
Nice, but I would avoid the dominant 7th chords. Clear it up a bit by opening up the voicings and change the harmonic structure (slightly) but not enough to change the static fell of the piece."
"Thank you for all the comments and suggestions, I'll come by with some revisions next week. Thanks!"
"From a compositional stand point, I think it's quite good. The problems I have with it however all involve the orchestration. First, I would agree with what has already been stated, wider intervals and lighter harmonies would give it more of that…"
"I would echo what Mr. Vario has said. There is a real tendency. when using the full orchestration, to have too much density in the harmony. It is almost as if there is noshift between consonant and dominant harmonies. Try lightening up the…"
"Of course!August- Sketch On A Summer Dream.pdf"
"Could you post a pdf of the score as well?"
"Hmm, here is my soundcloud of it. http://soundcloud.com/william-randal-bowers/sketch-on-a-summer-day"
"for some reason the compression on the file is completely messed up. it makes it very hard to make any sense of the music itself."
"This is beautiful! I just... can't even comprehend. I was listening to it, the passion... it's wonderful."
"Rubix Cube is amazing dude! You have more pieces of music you're gunna post on here? Cuz I really dig your style man."
"Very interesting to listen to, melodious and pleasing to hear. I especially like a quarter way through the piece where I believe the strings were doing a pizzicato. I like this piece, Merry Christmas"
"Can you tell me a little bit about this piece?
I would also love to see a score if you can."
I would also love to see a score if you can."
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Good to hear some almost dance-style stuff on here! The diversity of your music is cool - keep going :)