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"there are some good ideas there, but they still need shaping. for example, why do you double the left and right hands of the primo in some parts? I'd try to add some more material in that left hand.
And I agree that those chords cloud the sound. Try…"
And I agree that those chords cloud the sound. Try…"
"I just felt that they clouded the motion of the music above."
"Chris, thanks for the kind words. They are very wellcome I assure you. :) The spanish feel was quite unintended at least at a conscious level. :D And developing the sections is what I think i'll do but after all it's just an etude.
Kevin, thanks for…"
Kevin, thanks for…"
"I get the misterioso bit. Quite like the triplet feel at the beginning(why have you not written this in 12/8?) Not sure about the cluster chords. Have you tried this at a slightly slower tempo at all?"
"Great job so far. Interesting ideas. Good motion and interesting use of those low, blocked type chords. To me, there seems to be a little bit of a spanish feel, which I do not know is intentional or not. Sounds like the next step is perhaps…"
"Thank you so much, Sahil. Very glad you liked the piece. :) I actually had the idea of developing the first theme but after a while i thought it's not so good and turned to the faster theme. I'll try to do something with it. Thanks :)"
"Thanks a lot for the feedback, Adrian. You can't imagine how I appreciate it!
Haha, the Gb/F# is a stupid mistake, i must've missed it in the process. :D Also thanks for the advice on double bar lines - it's certainly necessary when such major…"
Haha, the Gb/F# is a stupid mistake, i must've missed it in the process. :D Also thanks for the advice on double bar lines - it's certainly necessary when such major…"
"Quite enjoyed this.
Why there is a Gb and not an F# in bar 2 defeats me. I think you also need double bar lines for major time signature and tempo changes - bar 17.
The faster theme was ok, but I found the intervals of the 5ths a bit boring after a…"
Why there is a Gb and not an F# in bar 2 defeats me. I think you also need double bar lines for major time signature and tempo changes - bar 17.
The faster theme was ok, but I found the intervals of the 5ths a bit boring after a…"
"Hello! I'm very impressed. Especially with the beginning with its electronic textures. It captures the essence of the thematic background quite well. Yeah, it's simple and maybe even minimalistic but what I like is that it deals with suspense very…"
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