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"Hi, I listened all the tracks and mostly good film music, congratulations. Only, I dont like the beginning of "The Birth.." is an old romantic music - to simple, to lyric, I think have to be something as music at 3`27 - misteriously, cosmik,…"
"Spyrus, sorry, I didnt see the "key word" NOT GOOD! in your replay.
Josip, Spyrus is right in all his long replay, read once more carefully his recommendations and go ahead!
Success!"
Josip, Spyrus is right in all his long replay, read once more carefully his recommendations and go ahead!
Success!"
"No this is not mistake but not interesting, better to move B in bass to D# (halfe notes ) D# the same to B tie to next, B in tenor jump to G (later, get down to A and go to G ).
SpyrusTheVirus said:
as I said, "One, not good for the ending chord,…"
SpyrusTheVirus said:
as I said, "One, not good for the ending chord,…"
"Hi, Josip. You progression is good like exercise, no cross voice and the distance in positions is good. By the way, have to keep the distance between tenor, alto, and soprano, but between bass and other can be reasonably large. You have one mistake…"
"Let me to explain :
-composition in music is a complex activity with a lot of components requiring theoretical and practical knowledge, not "rules" - knowledge, that help you to realize your idea. In a 3-4 min. composition, no problem, is easy to…"
-composition in music is a complex activity with a lot of components requiring theoretical and practical knowledge, not "rules" - knowledge, that help you to realize your idea. In a 3-4 min. composition, no problem, is easy to…"
"First of all we have to devise forms in two categories: 1.generals form as mono, binary and ternary (associated with all subcategories) and 2. forms related to historical periods: fugue, rondo, sonata, variations. First category you can "use"…"
"Good work and good performers! It`s a good piece in a concert with different works (slow, lyrical, etc.) I listened a lot of jazz- works with brass but your piece i listened twice and i like improvisations (espetially trombone), harmony,…"
"Nice atmosphere music, good for film, drama but as instrumental music i need more melodic lines, all are like accompaniment, good one, but without head-line. Maybe it`s better to develop a little bit incide strings long notes, when piano play? Take…"
"Not bad! go ahead! Believe in your force, you are good in simph. orch.
tom said:
yes i was surprised that i was selected as one of the top 10 young composers... for me its just a boring romantic piece! certainly i want to do something new, but also…"
tom said:
yes i was surprised that i was selected as one of the top 10 young composers... for me its just a boring romantic piece! certainly i want to do something new, but also…"
"Good work, congratulations. You feel the orchestra and you have good instrumental lines, contrasts... but this is the style of 19 th century!!! Find your saunds, you ideas and you can do something really modern and interesting.
Good luck!"
Good luck!"
Este prima lucrare din ciclul de piese "...for piano". Această înregistrare a fost făcută la Festivalul Internațional Zilele Muzicii Noi, Chișinău , iunie, 2...Is the first work at piano cycle. Was performed at International Festival The Days of New…
"The beginning is good, but this is not enough! Need to continueis, is too small, even for instrumental miniature."
"Even though there is a great deal of chromaticism and dissonance in this work, I find it highly melodic and enjoyable. And a tip of my hat in being able to secure a live performance. The first time I heard one of my string quartets played, a cold…"
"Thanks colleagues for listening my music. To Pepper side note: was not an intonation big problem (is not a studio-record and some places have a tune problem), i use chromatsm and dissonance (less majore\minore) in my musical language. I like very…"
"first off, congrates on getting a performance.
This was a great piece and well performed. Though each movement very very different from each other, they still flowed. There were some movements I felt were weaker then others, but that is to be…"
This was a great piece and well performed. Though each movement very very different from each other, they still flowed. There were some movements I felt were weaker then others, but that is to be…"
"First off, anytime someone can have a real orchestra play their compositions is a plus. Second, reminds me a lot of Shostakovitch style Three, Very Good!
Side note: Was there an intonation problem throughout or, were you composing with a lot of…"
Side note: Was there an intonation problem throughout or, were you composing with a lot of…"
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(Spasibo za otzyv, no eto vsego lish' proba i ona daleka ot sovershenstva. mne vsegda interesno bylo porabotat' s gitarnym zvukom. poka ya tol'ko uchus' muzyke i polnyy profan v kopozicii, poetomu ne uveren chto smogu sdelat' iz etogo kuska cel'noe proizvedenie.No v lyubom sluchae rad chto ponravilos'.)
thanks for interest of my work. I would like send you Eurydice (live record from concert) thru USCHOVNA. Please, let me know your mail.
Pavel K
kopecky.4me@tiscali.cz