Anders Christensen replied to Thelonious Richards's discussion Your opinion would be much appreciated!
"I like the originality of this piece. You have some chord changes in there that makes listening interesting and different.

In my opinion it does however lack a more general direction or as you motioned an overall form. I also think is would be…"
Sep 1, 2010
Adrian Allan replied to Thelonious Richards's discussion Your opinion would be much appreciated!
"There's no real melody here, so we have to judge the piece by its chordal movement.

At times it makes harmonic sense and other times it's too vague (for me). I want another movement or section now, as the general scheme of what I've just heard is…"
Aug 31, 2010
Simon Godden replied to Thelonious Richards's discussion Your opinion would be much appreciated!
"My pleasure. Thanks for sharing.

Thelonious Richards said:Thanks for giving it a listen Simon. I think those are very fair criticisms. I agree that the an overall form is lacking and so I will try to incorporate more strucutre into future works. I…"
Aug 31, 2010
Thelonious Richards left a comment for Simon Godden
"Hi Simon, thanks for the feedback on my prelude its really appreciated. Great music by the way, i'm particularly enjoying your string quartet."
Aug 31, 2010
Thelonious Richards left a comment for Tyler Hughes
"Thanks for listening to my prelude Tyler. Some really encouraging comments cheers!"
Aug 31, 2010
Thelonious Richards replied to Thelonious Richards's discussion Your opinion would be much appreciated!
"Thanks for giving it a listen Simon. I think those are very fair criticisms. I agree that the an overall form is lacking and so I will try to incorporate more strucutre into future works. I also agree that the production is not great, however i am…"
Aug 31, 2010
Thelonious Richards replied to Thelonious Richards's discussion Your opinion would be much appreciated!
"Thanks for your comments Tyler! You seem to have realised the mood i intended for this peice which is great. I agree with your criticisms concerning the title of prelude, perhaps i will expand this peice into a multi movement work in the future.…"
Aug 31, 2010
Simon Godden replied to Thelonious Richards's discussion Your opinion would be much appreciated!
"Okay, let's go. This is good stuff, but it lacks discipline and needs more work. I'm not going to mention the production, because that's not what this forum is all about, but in order to gain more criticism for your work, it might be a good idea to…"
Aug 30, 2010
Tyler Hughes replied to Thelonious Richards's discussion Your opinion would be much appreciated!
"This is very very good. A very mature piece of music, love the play with harmonies giving it a tonal/atonal feel. The movement of the piece also gives it a really good impressionistic feel that I am very attracted to. The dreariness of it and lack…"
Aug 30, 2010

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