cheryl fitzgerald replied to Syed Marwan Al-Edrus's discussion Waldeinsamkeit Draft
"I like the changing percussion textures, nice placement of beats in ad libi in beginning.   Later the drum fade-in is very cool.  Does the title mean "forest loneliness?""
Apr 6, 2016
H. S. Teoh replied to Syed Marwan Al-Edrus's discussion Waldeinsamkeit Draft
"Here's my thought on the transition at around 3:30: after the last note, have a cymbal crash, ff, and let it vibrate past the entrance of the softer instruments. The idea is that the loud cymbal will make the soft notes inaudible, but as it fades…"
Mar 16, 2016
Erwin van Delft replied to Syed Marwan Al-Edrus's discussion Waldeinsamkeit Draft
"Nice piece of work, I do like it. Also the transition around 3.30 is not bad at all, as you feared."
Mar 16, 2016
Erwin van Delft replied to Syed Marwan Al-Edrus's discussion Quincena Constructive Criticism
"Hi Syed,
Well, I love the idea, the melody line is good, it is nice to listen to. Your idea is good. What you need, is more experience... Just like me. :)
For the rest I hear some dissonants that seem to be out of place, clarinet, if I heard…"
Mar 1, 2016
22b8n9x97ddrd replied to Syed Marwan Al-Edrus's discussion Quincena Constructive Criticism
"It's a charming piece, but it needs, imo, a little more harmonic adventurousness, and a good modulation at some point. I don't mean to come off harshly, because I do feel it demonstrates a lot of potential for future efforts. The mood, also, is…"
Feb 28, 2016

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