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"Better than anything I write... so thats all i can say lol :P"
"I have always been learning both music theories in comparison, that is why I attempted to do this.. This could well be taken as a discussion.. Probably we might arrive at something like a cross of the two traditions..."
"Hi James:
Well, now, that was interesting.
Mozart in Egypt had extremely sharp contrasts between the lively emotional Indian sound and then the formal major key sound of Mozart. What tied it together was the underlying rhythms, but it was still…"
Well, now, that was interesting.
Mozart in Egypt had extremely sharp contrasts between the lively emotional Indian sound and then the formal major key sound of Mozart. What tied it together was the underlying rhythms, but it was still…"
"Thank you Jonas that was helpful... I thought before finalising I could post this on composers forum.. And yes I am getting quite a few valuable suggestion"
"Yes tyler, if that was the intention I should admit it was making me concentrate...
The piece in in E and as you said dorian mode... The E dorian mode and the E melodic minor differs only by one note for the dorian it is D and for melodic minor…"
The piece in in E and as you said dorian mode... The E dorian mode and the E melodic minor differs only by one note for the dorian it is D and for melodic minor…"
"It kind of reminds me about parts of the soundtrack of the game mass effect.
I like those little synth arpeggio's but It could use a stronger theme to really stand out though. You could also fatten up and go more crazy with those synths a bit, play…"
I like those little synth arpeggio's but It could use a stronger theme to really stand out though. You could also fatten up and go more crazy with those synths a bit, play…"
"Constructive replies.. thank you.. composers forum is helping me a lot.. Thanks to the admins...
Shivaranjan Raghuraman said:
Well I am quite starting to get the criticism i wished... Constructive.. Thank you ..
This was just a spontaneous work…"
Shivaranjan Raghuraman said:
Well I am quite starting to get the criticism i wished... Constructive.. Thank you ..
This was just a spontaneous work…"
"Sure Miko... I understand that,,, As you said I should work out more ..."
"Quite interesting comment...."
"Yes tyler, you are right.. This is what i wanted.. The sudden change of scales should also be connected.. i would take a simple example... How many notes do u think differenciates the major and minor scales??
Think over this... Play with the…"
Think over this... Play with the…"
"Hi tyler,
Firstly sorry for being unclear. I meant your samples and thats why I said it could be corrected at last. The scores are more important...
And regarding the transitions, I felt it wherever it occures and to be precise, at :20 the…"
Firstly sorry for being unclear. I meant your samples and thats why I said it could be corrected at last. The scores are more important...
And regarding the transitions, I felt it wherever it occures and to be precise, at :20 the…"
"Hi tyler,
There are two problems with this composition from my point of view. One is the woodwinds section itself, it could have been more realistic, but then, that can be processed even at the last stage.. :)
The second problem that I see is…"
There are two problems with this composition from my point of view. One is the woodwinds section itself, it could have been more realistic, but then, that can be processed even at the last stage.. :)
The second problem that I see is…"
"ok. so answering to your question: it's all depends on what your ambitions are as a composer. I rather stay away from giving people advice since i'm not a master ofcomposition. I see you got many ideas but in my opinion you need more workout."
"Don't expect many comments. I can't tell you why. Will check them now and give you my feedback."
"Hmmmmm I wish someone does comment...:( :( :("
"Shivaranjan, nice layering of sounds! I hope you continue your exploration of fusing east and west.
Western music, especially music in Mozart's time, was concerned with harmonic progressions and tonal centers, on top of which he wrote beautiful…"
Western music, especially music in Mozart's time, was concerned with harmonic progressions and tonal centers, on top of which he wrote beautiful…"
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Shivaranjan, I like your compositions very much, especially the Suspense Sequence. I can hear the Indian music influence, and there's nothing I like better than the fusion of different cultures and traditions, as I think that is very fertile ground. Your music drives forward with some very compelling motifs, and the orchestration is very rich.
I am curious as to what you mean by "humanizing" and "realistic." I'm guessing you mean it's more accessible because it's not atonal? Just curious, because I certainly have ideas about that.
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