Mia Momonouchi left a comment for Tim Marko
"Thank you for the feedback! I do not have much experience with orchestration, so I am very grateful for your critique. I haven't touched that piece for a while but will be making adjustments to it as it comes along."
Jul 17, 2012

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  • What a cool piece.  Nice melody that just allows the listener to flow along.

     

    Only comments are technical.  The solo instrument at 53 sec. seems a bit trite.  The melody is great, possibly a better "sound".  (I know this could be a function of the voices you have available, but experiment with some other sounds if you have them.)  The bass drum at 1:11 is a bit distorted.  The idea was good, again, possibly a tighter sound from the voice.

     

    I liked the piece a lot.

     

    Tim

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