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"It's okay that the rhythms are straight forward in the first part tho in my opinion, although in the second part once they start to change you should expand on that a bit. At least in this piece. It would add a nice dynamic and give you more…"
"Thanks! You're spot on with saying the strings are midi. I agree that one of my biggest flaws is rhythms that are too simple/straightforward, and that's something I'm trying to break out of.
vincenti zghra said:
I don't know it's pretty simple, and…"
vincenti zghra said:
I don't know it's pretty simple, and…"
"I don't know it's pretty simple, and pretty nice. I don't really like the strings, they sound like midi-strings with reverb and are quite muddy. But compositionally I would say this is fine, although for a complete piece I think you have to expand…"
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