Jonathan Metz replied to Kirk Williams's discussion New Member - Looking for feedback
"Very energizing. I agree that there could be more going on at the climactic moments, adding another part in there maybe? Also, perhaps suddenly cutting the percussion for a brief second before a climactic moment would really intensify the surprise.…"
Feb 9, 2011
Kirk Williams replied to Kirk Williams's discussion New Member - Looking for feedback
"Thanks Ryland! I really appreciate your feedback and time.

Ryland Lafferty said:
I like what you're trying to do! Your harmonies are nicel; very james bond esque. But it takes too long to lead up to something that doesn't last long enough. Try…"
Feb 8, 2011
Ryland Lafferty replied to Kirk Williams's discussion New Member - Looking for feedback
"I like what you're trying to do! Your harmonies are nicel; very james bond esque. But it takes too long to lead up to something that doesn't last long enough. Try using really thick chords to deepen the textures. Also, I have to agree with Ray, the…"
Feb 8, 2011
Kirk Williams replied to Kirk Williams's discussion New Member - Looking for feedback
"Thank you so much!

Ray Kemp said:
Fairly boring percussion pattern. As a listener (not a musician or a critic) I know pretty quickly what the next bar will sound like. More surprises please. Also there is no glue holding the recording together.…"
Feb 5, 2011
Kirk Williams replied to Henri Vartio's discussion "King of the skies" - a trailer music piece
"This composition sounds great. I would recommend possibly not having so much in or in the forefront at the same time. The mix of the music is more like radio then film in my opinion. It is a really great piece of work and think you just need more…"
Feb 5, 2011
Kirk Williams replied to Mike's discussion I need your help
"Just my two cents, but when determining a key, I generally look at the Bass/Root notes for "1" chord and the 5th. It has been my experience that generally speaking the "1" and "5" tend to determine the Key. For example, in the song attached to this…"
Feb 5, 2011
Kirk Williams replied to Mike's discussion I need your help
"Hi Mike,
 
First, very nice MAN!!! Great work (and chops).
Now from what my ear hears, you are definitely in the key of E minor or you cold say the key of G if you want but since the major feel of the song is actually "minor" then I would say E…"
Feb 5, 2011
Kirk Williams replied to Minseo Park's discussion Doraji Fugue - A Fugue based on a Korean Traditional Theme
"What a nice combination of sounds. The composition if terrific. I would recommend that you have a little more contrast in "loudness" if you will. For example, the first time a motif is presented, I would of course make it the aural focus. After the…"
Feb 5, 2011

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