Ingo Lee replied to Joe Bernstein's discussion Feedback on my 2 little compositions
"Hey Joe, this is good stuff, I like it!  Tyler has given you an excellent review and instructions here and I agree with everything he has said and I don't have anything to add.  I look forward to hearing more from you as you explore composition…"
Jun 3, 2016
Tyler Hughes replied to Joe Bernstein's discussion Feedback on my 2 little compositions
"Both pieces are fine, a little on the short side, but still good pieces. 
The first score I get a pop vibe with the harmonic choices and ostinato bass. At times I felt like it needed a third voice or a fully harmony. You use triads in blocks very…"
May 29, 2016
Joe Bernstein replied to Joe Bernstein's discussion Little compositions (4)
"Thank you, I'll be sure to do that! Ian Ring said:
These are nicely crafted compositions. They're like two-part inventions. You establish themes, repeat them with variations, developing motifs of melody and rhythm.
To be helpful to you, my…"
May 25, 2016
Ian Ring replied to Joe Bernstein's discussion Little compositions (4)
"These are nicely crafted compositions. They're like two-part inventions. You establish themes, repeat them with variations, developing motifs of melody and rhythm.
To be helpful to you, my criticism would be that you can draw a lot more out of the…"
May 25, 2016
Tyler Hughes replied to Joe Bernstein's discussion Beginner Piano composition Form to choose?
"Your "easy" forms are going to be your binary forms (Rounded, Simple, etc) but they won't expand your pieces. The Sonata and Rondo forms are not easy. They are about equal in difficulty but they are not difficult. You might want to work on…"
May 12, 2016
roger stancill replied to Joe Bernstein's discussion Beginner Piano composition Form to choose?
"Hi Joe, I suggest thumbing thru a book of collected works and finding 1 that
you like, and can relate to. Then study it's form and apply your own creativity
to that form.  Easy is not necessarily easy to define. Simple is a different thing.
You can…"
May 11, 2016

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