Rick Waugh replied to Jacob Allen Hall's discussion Serenade for Flute, unaccompanied
"Have to agree with Ingo, that it needs more thematic cohesion, continuity. I remember reading a book on composition, and the author was discussing the first composition he created in university. He packed it full of different motifs. The instructor…"
Apr 24, 2016
Ingo Lee replied to Jacob Allen Hall's discussion Serenade for Flute, unaccompanied
"You have some good ideas here I think, you introduce motifs and do variations on them, you have some interesting rhythmic ideas and modulations as well.  The performance and recording are very good as well.  I think you have a few too many dotted…"
Apr 24, 2016

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