Gavin Brown replied to ElektroN's discussion Another song up!
"Hi ElectroN,
This sounds to me like a good example of Trance, though usually Trance tunes are much longer, which makes me wonder if you have posted a short version here. Sonically this seems to me pretty well done, altough the bass felt a little bit…"
Sep 29, 2018
ElektroN replied to ElektroN's discussion My first electronic song with the FL-studio
"My first with the FL-studio. I used to have some old version of Magix and got tired of the poor quality. I haven't made that many songs though. About the step-ups, I'm always strugling with the transition to keep it fluid. Would like to use them…"
Sep 19, 2018
Charles Holt replied to ElektroN's discussion My first electronic song with the FL-studio
"I had to google what "Seven Nation Army" was but I don't hear a similarity upon review."
Sep 19, 2018
Paul Ritchings replied to ElektroN's discussion My first electronic song with the FL-studio
"Thanks for posting this.  Your first ever?  Or first with FL Studio?
Something you might try: after the syncopated section have a 'step up' (key change) by a tone or minor third and also introduce more percussion layers.  Then step down at the end. …"
Sep 19, 2018
ElektroN replied to ElektroN's discussion My first electronic song with the FL-studio
"Thank you Bob! And Ingo Lee I'm actually reliefed to hear that because those are the things I've been strugling with before. And yes, the bass line is pretty close to the one in "white stripes". I'll try to pay more attention to this in the future."
Sep 18, 2018
Ingo Lee replied to ElektroN's discussion My first electronic song with the FL-studio
"Hi Electron -
This is very good for starting out.  The structure is attractive and makes sense and the sounds work well for it.  Your opening riff is very similar to the "White Stripes"  'Seven Nation Army'  song which could be a potential problem. …"
Sep 18, 2018
Bob Morabito replied to ElektroN's discussion My first electronic song with the FL-studio
"Very catchy, very enjoyable..

Nicely done and thanks so much for sharing!

Bob
https://soundcloud.com/bob-morabito"
Sep 18, 2018
ElektroN replied to Galih Setiawan's discussion Birthplace (Epic Emotional Music)
"Very nice track! I can imagine hearing this is some movie's final scene or something. Maybe needs just a short, more quiet section in the middle to have a little contrast. Only the strings maybe? Was enjoyable though!"
Sep 18, 2018
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Sep 18, 2018

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