Daniel Moretti replied to Daniel Moretti's discussion Spirits - new composition
"yes you are right, I also thought about putting the A section at the end of the piece "
Sep 9, 2015
Daniel Moretti replied to Daniel Moretti's discussion Spirits - new composition
"Hello, sorry I had no time to reply.....I really appreciate your feedback and your advice ! 
@Paul Halley: I'll try to use your chords in the choral ! Thank you
@H.S. Teoh: Yes I have a score, I'll upload it. yeah the piece isn't quite finished yet.…"
Sep 9, 2015
H. S. Teoh replied to Daniel Moretti's discussion Spirits - new composition
"You have some pretty nice things going on... though if you have a score it would help in giving more specific feedback.  I liked the way the 2nd theme comes in with full grandeur. Very good contrast with the lightly-scored 1st theme.
It sounded like…"
Sep 5, 2015
Paul Halley replied to Daniel Moretti's discussion Spirits - new composition
"Impressive piece Daniel. Both themes are great and very well contrasted. Its very exciting to listen to - a very effective piece. The only suggestion I have is to extend the ending a bit more. Draw it out and expand the big chordal theme more to…"
Sep 2, 2015
H. S. Teoh replied to Daniel Moretti's discussion A song for my bird (2 pianos )- Feedback please.
"Glad I could help!"
Apr 17, 2015
Daniel Moretti replied to Daniel Moretti's discussion A song for my bird (2 pianos )- Feedback please.
"I listened to your changes and I like that very much ! I'll see if I can develop those chords throughout the piece...
Thank you for your invested time !"
Apr 17, 2015
H. S. Teoh replied to Daniel Moretti's discussion A song for my bird (2 pianos )- Feedback please.
"OK, so I inputted mm.42-48  from your score and played around with it a little, and here's what I came up with. See the attached pdf.
The first page is taken from your original, the second page shows variant A where I replaced the chord in m.44 with…"
Apr 15, 2015
Daniel Moretti replied to Daniel Moretti's discussion A song for my bird (2 pianos )- Feedback please.
"Thank you very much ! I'll have a look at the chords tomorrow and I'll tell you what I think. I may don't have the needed experience of composing since I'm only 17 haha, so this will certainly help a lot !"
Apr 15, 2015
H. S. Teoh replied to Daniel Moretti's discussion A song for my bird (2 pianos )- Feedback please.
"Listened to it again this morning. Having the score helped a lot in picking out some of the melody lines which got obscured by the poor midi rendering. Anyway...
I thought at m.21 you could use a sus4 chord so that the pause doesn't sound too…"
Apr 15, 2015
Daniel Moretti replied to Daniel Moretti's discussion A song for my bird (2 pianos )- Feedback please.
"Ok, yes I would really appreciate if you could have a look at it, thank you again !"
Apr 14, 2015
H. S. Teoh replied to Daniel Moretti's discussion A song for my bird (2 pianos )- Feedback please.
"P.S. Just noticed that you originally scored this for string section / string quintet. I'm wondering if it might be more effective in this medium than on two pianos. Perhaps you might want to consider importing this original scoring into your…"
Apr 14, 2015
H. S. Teoh replied to Daniel Moretti's discussion A song for my bird (2 pianos )- Feedback please.
"I'm at work now, so I'll have to listen to your piece again later, following along the lead sheet.
I had guessed that the "out-of-place" chord may have been intentional. I totally understand the intent behind that. I'll have to look more carefully…"
Apr 14, 2015
Daniel Moretti replied to Daniel Moretti's discussion A song for my bird (2 pianos )- Feedback please.
"Hello, thank you very much for these kind words and your feedback. Yes, I'll post the score too.
First of, yes the playback isn't exactly played as I had in mind the interpretation. I originally wrote it for String ensemble, so it isn't exactly the…"
Apr 14, 2015
H. S. Teoh replied to Daniel Moretti's discussion A song for my bird (2 pianos )- Feedback please.
"Could you also post the score? It would help greatly in giving you more specific feedback.
My condolences on your budgie... hope you are coping well. "Mila"... what a beautiful name for a budgie!
The music itself sounds quite intense and emotional,…"
Apr 14, 2015
Tim Marko replied to Daniel Moretti's discussion First Composition for Symphony Orchestra - Frozen Hearts
"Daniel,
Would it be possible to see the score.  It would help to see what you intended with the piece."
Jan 22, 2015
Sam Powys replied to Daniel Moretti's discussion First Composition for Symphony Orchestra - Frozen Hearts
"Sibelius comes with a basic MIDI library in addition to its own sample library, which it has the option to play from Bob Porter said:
Daniel,
I've used Sibelius since version 4. Your sounds seem to be General Midi, not anything that comes with…"
Jan 20, 2015
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