Gavin Brown replied to Caspian Moon's discussion Aiko
"Hi Caspian,
A little bit of an explanation as to what the piece is about or any background you can supply as to how you came to compose it would be helpful and will increase your chances of getting comments on it. Also, in looking at your past…"
Apr 14, 2018
Caspian Moon replied to Caspian Moon's discussion Love Is Blue When It's You
"Thanks! I'm working on it, i removed the repetition and going to develop it as i find time."
Apr 8, 2018
Marco Di Stefano replied to Caspian Moon's discussion Love Is Blue When It's You
"Hi,
It suddenly got my interest but shamed a bit at 0:30, maybe avoid repeating the first phrase?
I think there is interesting material but too much repetition along the track.
You should try to introduce a theme and play with it. Also creating some…"
Apr 8, 2018
Caspian Moon replied to Caspian Moon's discussion Love Is Blue When It's You
"Thanks for your opinion, i have problems with orchestrating I can't say that i'm very good in that area, I'll try to improve it :)"
Apr 6, 2018
Caspian Moon replied to Caspian Moon's discussion My compositions
"Thanks for the tips. I'm reading Principles of Orchestration by Rimsky-Korsakov now and after i finish it i'll try to rework on the waltz."
Feb 10, 2018
Caspian Moon replied to Caspian Moon's discussion My compositions
"Thank you. I developed the first one to an orchestral piece(my orchestration is poor though) you can listen to it here Valse"
Feb 10, 2018
Keith J Hampton replied to Caspian Moon's discussion My compositions
" I like both, however the first seems a bit more developed and thoughtful.  The 2nd seems to meander a bit, but otherwise is nice.  I would try to use some melodies in a lower octave to avoid having them sound like variations on a theme or too much…"
Feb 9, 2018
Caspian Moon replied to Caspian Moon's discussion Dernière Valse
"Thanks for the reply! I'm learning orchestration at the moment. I will definitely improve this piece after i feel i have enough understanding of an orchestra."
Jan 31, 2018
Caspian Moon replied to Caspian Moon's discussion My compositions
"Thank you MM Coston :)"
Jan 19, 2018
Caspian Moon replied to Caspian Moon's discussion My compositions
"Thanks for the replies :) I don't have a classical guitar yet but i'm saving up for it. And i just installed a DAW today to learn to create better compositions without mistakes. "
Jan 15, 2018
Bob Morabito replied to Caspian Moon's discussion My compositions
"Hi Caspian--I enjoyed these very much:)
I found Derniere Valse simply charming and enjoyed the beautiful mood it created.
Coeur Fissure is also very nice and off to a great start--but I feel the biggest stumbling block here is that you might be…"
Jan 15, 2018
Caspian Moon replied to Caspian Moon's discussion My compositions
"Thanks for the reply! I see these pieces as guitar compositions. I'm not very good at creating orchestral compositions so i'm just sticking to guitar while i'm learning to do bigger things. Thanks for the critique, i actually want to develop the…"
Jan 13, 2018

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