Anders Pedersen replied to Anders Pedersen's discussion New piece - feedback appreciated
"Hi Ian

Thanks for honest and useful criticism. Will try out your suggestions and see where it takes me.
Ian Ring said:
The second half of the head feels somehow ... contrived? The tension you've built in the preceding bars lets go at the end and…"
May 25, 2015
Ian Ring replied to Anders Pedersen's discussion New piece - feedback appreciated
"The second half of the head feels somehow ... contrived? The tension you've built in the preceding bars lets go at the end and it feels inappropriate. Maybe you should try *not* resolving to the Ab at the end of the head - leave it hanging on the…"
May 24, 2015
Anders Pedersen replied to Anders Pedersen's discussion New piece - feedback appreciated
"Hi Roger
 
Thanks for the feedback!
I like the idea of adding a horn. I'll try it out and see if I can create something interesting.
 
Cheers,
Anders
 
roger stancill said:
Hi Anders, I like what you've got so far ... simple but strong.
I felt…"
Apr 15, 2015
roger stancill replied to Anders Pedersen's discussion New piece - feedback appreciated
"Hi Anders, I like what you've got so far ... simple but strong.
I felt like it had a mellow pulse(groove) and that you might try
adding 1 more voice, like a horn or clarinet, ala Kenny G, here and
there to give it just a bit more depth, and pi-jazz…"
Apr 13, 2015

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