18ncd9acb5w24 left a comment for Robert Baram
"you may want to spell your last name correctly"
Aug 15, 2011
Spiros Makris replied to 18ncd9acb5w24's discussion Entering Tartarus ('til Death Do Us Part)
"at about 1:50 I'd like more sound, more thickness, I want the brass to rip my head off!
As a music piece it's fine, has contrast, and a cinematic feel. However, when heard with the title in mind, some issues arise.
 
A bit more specifics on tartarus…"
Aug 8, 2011
18ncd9acb5w24 replied to 18ncd9acb5w24's discussion Entering Tartarus ('til Death Do Us Part)
"wow! thank you. that really means a lot. this is one of the pieces i plan on sending in my portfolio of compositions for when i go on to college next fall. your comment really does mean a lot to me. it means i may actually have a decent future in…"
Aug 8, 2011
Steve Campagnoli replied to 18ncd9acb5w24's discussion Entering Tartarus ('til Death Do Us Part)
"Brian:
I assume you were going for “Abandon hope, all ye that enter here” with this piece. If so, you thoroughly succeeded, in my opinion. 
I found the musical images compelling and powerful. 
This has been one of the neatest experiences of my 60+…"
Aug 8, 2011
18ncd9acb5w24 replied to 18ncd9acb5w24's discussion Entering Tartarus ('til Death Do Us Part)
"i just took a recording from my computer off my Finale 2009.
alright. thanks. I'll look into fixing those. the end especially. thank you"
Aug 7, 2011
James G. Watson replied to 18ncd9acb5w24's discussion Entering Tartarus ('til Death Do Us Part)
"I like it. What samples did you use? I think better samples would get a better result sonically.
Composition-wise, I think it's good, but maybe it could be a little bolder in the middle. And the end seems a little too hopeful, like it should be…"
Aug 7, 2011
18ncd9acb5w24 replied to 18ncd9acb5w24's discussion Entering Tartarus ('til Death Do Us Part)
"this may work better"
Jun 29, 2011
18ncd9acb5w24 posted a video
this is a piece i wrote for a concert band on finale 2009. it's sort of the rough draft. so please, constructive criticism would be awesome. first off, for t...
Jun 29, 2011

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