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  • Joe.

         This piece is a panoply of ideas.  At first it was interesting, but as the themes kept ever changing my interest tended to wane.  You might pick out your best ideas and develope them into a coherent stream that the listener can follow easily.  I liked the mood and feel of the minor key.

    Lawrence

  • Hi Guys,

    Thank you both for your helpful suggestions, I am genuinely grateful for these!

    My main goal for this piece was to try and mess around with the one key theme and just see what I could do to it, but, as you both mentioned, I feel I may have focused too much on that one theme and ended up not putting much other material into the piece.

    Michael - I have rewritten part of the coda to make it a bit more interesting since uploading it to youtube, there are some modulations they go as follows, C-sharp minor - D-flat major - C-sharp minor - A minor - C-sharp minor.

    Thanks again,

    Joe

  • Hi Michael,

    Thanks again for the kind words!

    Best wishes,

    Joe

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