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I like your melodies and the harmonies that you use with them are good too, you have some nice colors. This is kind of a theme and variations form which is cool. I'd like to hear more rhythmic variation in the left hand part, it's too repetitive to my ear. I also think you could do some modulations that would add appeal to this piece. Good work!
i thought this was a delightful piece and enjoyed listening to it.