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Hello, I don't post here often, but I wanted to share these some piano miniatures I wrote lately, to hopefully get some feedback about them. This one is titled "Valse", and has a simple structure and short melodic phrases.

I have attached the audio file (computer generated), and the pdf of the score.

I appreciate any feedback :)

François

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This was the one piece of the 3 that I found difficult because of the pauses. Sure, it's beautiful in its way and you modulate around bar 52. Another night piece and although seeming easy to play would need quite some control to play with just the left hand up to bar 16 at pp.

Pleasant to listen to. Nice rendering.

Cheers.

I don't get the pauses I have said the same thing on your other work. I think you need to create more cohesive and complete phrases.   

Thanks again for the comment! I have been told the same thing about the pauses from many people, I do see your point of view. I am going to try to record it properly, because I feel it sounds better with more resonance from the pedal.

François

Dane Aubrun said:

This was the one piece of the 3 that I found difficult because of the pauses. Sure, it's beautiful in its way and you modulate around bar 52. Another night piece and although seeming easy to play would need quite some control to play with just the left hand up to bar 16 at pp.

Pleasant to listen to. Nice rendering.

Cheers.

Thank you for the feedback! Indeed I have been told the same about the pauses. For this particular work, it is what I intended originally, to create some tension and release. When I play it myself, it sounds better to my ears, but it is a subjective point of view.

François

Saul Gefen said:

I don't get the pauses I have said the same thing on your other work. I think you need to create more cohesive and complete phrases.   

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