• I like the harmonies and the orchestration, but the recurring rhythm seems to be based on a courtly dance form and this detracted  from my perception of Valhalla as a place of great warriors.  One suggestion, FWIW, is to rework the rhythm into something more march-like - a steady beat of eigth-notes might be a place to start.   With all the brass and horns, some tympani would add a royal feel to this. 


    You're up against 100 years of Wagner performances here so you are going to need some heft! 

  • Yeah that Wagner guy seems to have been here already but he doesn't scare me... much. 


    I'll thinker around with the rhythms and see what comes up. 


    Thanks for listen and the thoughtful comments Paul. 



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