• Morning David.

    This has some good ideas and your orchestration is good.

    I've realised now what I miss in music like this is the sense of phrases and by that I mean cadences at the ends whereas this piece just just keeps rolling on.

    This is just me being old fashioned so it's not meant to be a criticism just my own preference.


  • What a fantastic handling of the orchestra - wonderful! Would you also present to us the score?

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