I've been toying with the theme of this piece for a few years now. It's a version of the Hebrew hymn/prayer "Ani Ma'amin". There's just something about it that appealed to me. While working on something else, I was brought back to it and ended up with this.
At this point I don't feel it's done, but not sure where to go with it. Possibly inserting a second theme or further develop this one?
Any ideas?
Thanks,
Tim
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The dynamics have been compressed I think so not much difference between pp and f
On thing missing is the phrasing (Think of every note being accented). MIDI will sound a lot smoother than real playing and good phrasing will lift the piece.
For example viola in m32. I would slur the quavers in pairs, emphasises the first note.