Some criticism please! :)

Hello, my name is Oscar and I'm new to this forum.

I've recently finished a new piece named "The Road of Dreams" and would like to get some constructive criticism.

Here's the youtube-link. I've created some sort of slideshow to go with the music, as it is quite a cinematic piece. Please enjoy! :D

By the way, please turn up the volume a bit, it's mixed a bit low.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qi3TvpAUq5E

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  • You definitely have a natural feel for this kind of music. Now you can move on to another style!

  • Fantastic—it's quite majestic and moving. I enjoyed both the full and quiet sections; they work together to enhance each other through contrast, and the rich texture is even throughout, giving cohesion. Did you play the tin whistle and the guitar yourself? This is a great work.

  • Okay, thank you very much! 

    Good to know that the parts work together. I was a bit sceptical about it when I wrote it myself, to be honest. I think it worked out quite well in the end, though. Yes, I played the Tin Whistle and the Guitar myself.

  • I liked it very much. And I liked another piece of yours - "The Green Island" which I found on YouTube - even more. Please post more of your works.

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