Tell me if you think this is too repetitive (see my previous post) to be it's own movement (it is intended to be). I want to use this as the end of a vocal song cycle but for now I'm just going to consider it a second movement. I'm aware that no orchestras have enough flutes for this, so if you're going to say something about that, please suggest specific measures and what instrument you would have playing each note. If any public domain poems come to mind that you think may suit the song cycle, feel free to post it. Any and all critiques welcome, but please keep in mind that this genre is very esoteric.