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I like it, it reminds me a bit of the Seikilos Epitaph. Are you sure your harp isn't a lute?
You could give the ending a little more impact by adding some eighth notes in the harp during the last two measures.
Thank you both for your feedback. Thank you for recommending the Seikilos Epitaph, Sid, I'd never heard of it. As for the 'harp', the mp3 is played by my free software, MuseScore, which doesn't always sound quite right.
Thanks especially for the suggestion about the eighth notes; I've been playing around with it and that sounds quite good.
I guess my harp comment was a bit unclear. I didn't mean to suggest that I thought the harp sounded like a lute, just that it kind of feels like lute music to me, and I wondered if you were using the harp as a substitute for the lute or something.