This is a track that I've been working on for the past week or so. I'm planning on putting in some vocal accompaniment. The guitar is a proxy for the vocals right now.
I'd like your take on it. I do not have a PDF, because I don't know how to write/read sheet music. I apologise. I'm learning as fast as I can.
Oh thank you! I'll work on the strings and the piano. :))
Rodney Carlyle Money said:
I found some interest in this, particular the opening piano part. But it feels raw, like a piece that is not fully formed. Also, it just stops, there isn't really an ending.
Thank you for your critique :)
Yeah, it's not a refined piece. Far from it. I always try to get critique at the halfway point, which I believe I had reached with the vocals proxy. :)
Gav Brown said:
There's a celesta and a piano. I don't have a keyboard. I don't know how you play a keyboard. All of it is done in FL Studio. Yes there are two kinds of drums. A taiko and snares.
Ah, thank you :) No I am not done with it. As mentioned before: far from it. I' only halfway through it.
I put a reverb because of that exact reason, but apparently, my output gain was too much.
Yes, there is a proper backstory, but it is not apparent, because in music, I play with the names of the tracks. It's actually about a guy's journey to find the 'perfect girl' and his desperation and then he finds her one day. Very simple, cheesy story,
There isn't a *set* theme as such, because it's all in the lyrics, which I've written. I'm gonna record in November, which is a far way away.
Bob Porter said: