Hello, everyone! I look forward to joining in on some musical discussions as most of my peers aren't all that into sitting for hours deciding between a "dotted eighth and a sixteenth" and a "quarter note, eighth note" triplet.
My question is what would be the best way to notate this measure? The first version is how I had it because that's how I envisioned the notes coming in. I was given advice to change it to multiple lines/voices, which made the overall score look much better, but this one measure seems off to me. Is it okay to have the rests floating way up in the middle of nowhere like that? Is it better to have them lined up evenly, or should they be as low as possible above the notes they hover over?
Thanks for your help!