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Hi,

It has been some time I was not here.  I have found a new

discussion on Creativity from ResearchGate.  It is a well established

free environment.  It was very difficult for me to get accepted as an

independent researcher as I am not affiliated with any university. 

Sorry that I have neglected Composer's Forum.

I will be posting some of my work once in a while. I continue to

compose music.  It is impossible to put all of that here neither

meaningful maybe.

Here is the first piece of my new song cycle 'Songs for you!' for teenagers.

Cheers.

Ali

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cCPb7o8b_dE

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Hi Ali,

nice to hear from you again. The piece is neat and pretty. I fancy the bass voice which I think provide both support and sort of counterpoint line. I had drums in my right ear only. I would like to have a less extreme panning of the drums, it felt a bit disentangled.

I am on researchgate too b.t.w., actually one of my projects is called creativity. Maybe we will see each other there.

Cheers,

Kjell

Nice simple pop tune Ali, thanks for posting this.  You could definitely develop this much further and add some lyrics as well, I think it would have commercial appeal if you are interested in that.

Thank you Kjell.  I will try to find you in ResearchGate.
I will think about the drums panning idea.


Kjell Prytz said:

Hi Ali,

nice to hear from you again. The piece is neat and pretty. I fancy the bass voice which I think provide both support and sort of counterpoint line. I had drums in my right ear only. I would like to have a less extreme panning of the drums, it felt a bit disentangled.

I am on researchgate too b.t.w., actually one of my projects is called creativity. Maybe we will see each other there.

Cheers,

Kjell

Thank you Ingo.  I wrote the music based on a text actually.

I attach it here.

About commercial thing, I am really bad in these money matters, no relations either...

Ciao.

Ali

Ingo Lee said:

Nice simple pop tune Ali, thanks for posting this.  You could definitely develop this much further and add some lyrics as well, I think it would have commercial appeal if you are interested in that.

Attachments:

So you have lyrics Ali, all you need is a singer!

Selling is easy, you just post it here.

https://bandcamp.com/

The hard part is promotion, marketing, getting someone to go to BandCamp and spend money.

But others do it, why not you?

Hi, Ali,

Yes, long time no see/hear!

As others have said, a nice, easy going pop tune. Clipped off a little abruptly but that just needs extending the silence at the end, maybe just a tiny pause on the closing notes.

In a collection of pieces it would stand alone well without a singer but as you wrote it to a text, the vocal would sound nice if you could find a singer to match the gentleness of the music.

Altogether good.

Bests for now,

Dane

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