My latest piece fresh from the oven. I tried something a bit new for myself, and i am wondering, does it work? What do I mean by work? That's a good question that can be broken up into many different categories, but mainly, does it make sense, does the composition keep a certain coherence to it. A kind of musical presentation that is consistent with the whole piece.
The back bone of this piece is the harmonic motif of c-e-f# and texture of single repeating notes, usually f,c,e. The motifs are broken at parts and at times the composition morphs into something completely different.
Another question I'd like to ask is about the transition parts. Do the transition parts hold? Or do they slow down the piece too much? The general feel of the piece is right on that line of movement and stillness at times, and i try to dance around that line.
It's fairly short (almost 5 minutes), but it is the longest multiple instrument piece i wrote so far... So hurray hehe. Thanks in advance for any criticism.