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Interesting. The melody is slightly offputting on it's own (I assume that was the purpose), but your harmonies are quite interesting. Your material has potential, get back to work. :P
Solo melody at begin (intro) is free filing style without metronome.I stack with harmonies in several past versions because I was little bit greedy, piano devoured me:) but finally I somehow scrambled out:)Piano is not guitar, I have to change my approach.