Uploading a piece i finished in march (but feel to give suggestions if you have any).

It is a pianopiece with cello, violin and clarinet. The name of the piece is german and makes no sense. :)

Please give me your thoughts. Will make a score of it as soon as I finish the other one.

Thanks for your ears and time!

Per

https://soundcloud.com/user7789882/per-der-d-mon-tanzt-ein

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  • I really enjoyed this music. It's an interesting mix of genres and tasty ideas. 

    I was starting to think it needed some change about 2/3 of the way through and you did just that for musical refreshment.

    I can't hear anything that really needs changing. I think any changes would be up to you.

    Phil 

  • Thanks Philips,, Yeah, I consider this piece finished when I've transfered it to a score. Next month I think! :)

    Thanks for you time and thoughts!

  • I would have liked to see more focus on the clarinet - it seemed when you did, especially in the beginning, I was intrigued by it's color - because it seemed the strings had the lime-light much more often, while the piano seemed to accent, for a lot of the time.  These were just my initial impressions. After listening twice, I felt this wasn't quite right =)  It was better balanced than I gave it credit.  Though, I still wish there were more expressive lines for the clarinet.

    Very pleasant work.

    Looking forward to more/different ensembles from you.

  • I liked the first half, light and dancy with a gypsy feel.  About half way through I thought it rambled.  I would add some melodies to the second half and end with a flourish.  Nice work.

  • Nice chill out music!

  • Thanks Trevor and Adam! There will be more output poster later on! :) Thanks for listening!

    Lawrence: I thought the best melody was in the second half and was the best of them all. :) But thanks for your time and thoughts on it! 

    Lawrence Aurich said:

    I liked the first half, light and dancy with a gypsy feel.  About half way through I thought it rambled.  I would add some melodies to the second half and end with a flourish.  Nice work.

    PER - Der Dämon tanzt (ein teufelkreis Tanz)
    Uploading a piece i finished in march (but feel to give suggestions if you have any). It is a pianopiece with cello, violin and clarinet. The name o…
  • Ich weiss nicht Kristofer. Es ist Zirkular. doch schreibt es Rund auch!

    Es ist ein Teufel. vielleicht es gibt ein pentagram the Teufel tanzt auf`?

    (pseudo-Deutsch)

  • Jahowl Kristofer!

    Philip, I forgot to respond. Thanks for your ears on this one and I'm happy you liked it!


    Phillip Lovgren said:

    I really enjoyed this music. It's an interesting mix of genres and tasty ideas. 

    I was starting to think it needed some change about 2/3 of the way through and you did just that for musical refreshment.

    I can't hear anything that really needs changing. I think any changes would be up to you.

    Phil 

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