So, for the best two months I have been cranking away at this piece, although I originally planned to make these two parts movements of my symphony, my composition teacher convinced me otherwise. The two sections are supposed to be opposites of each other in sound (the first section being a very pure, pentatonic/modal way of dealing with things) with the second being a very rough, edgy, agitated one. Also, I learned this style is called "California Impressionism" because it takes influence from minimalism and impressionism. I would really like feedback on transitions and if I keep the moods of the two different sections (also advice on the last section would be more appreciated than advice on the first section). Also, does the piece flow well?