Hi y'all, This here is the 5th in a series of pieces I have been
working on fer years.( I hope to write 10 to 12 in total and possibly
publish.) I've always loved Nocturnes,( especially at night ) har X 2.
The main idea was to write simpler pcs. more or less like training wheels
for beginners or folks who like to play but don't have the skills to tackle
the Pro's.
I'm curious as to what mood you think this alludes to. or use the star scale or.....
( don't just sit there give me some feedback but remember...Santa's watchin' )
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I couldn't get any feedback from an earlier post elsewhere, so I shoved it here.and the main reason I'm in this forum is in hope of gaining a better perspective
on my music It's totally selfish but I have no other soundingboard
Please advise.... where better??RS
Honestly, I have no idea how it got into Politics did a secret panel vote it in -
I think not. I read 'forum' , scrolled down and clicked. My mind was on
location-location- location equation V=C/FX3 get it? RS
Kristofer Emerig said:
Hi Roger,
Initial comment: you need to activate the right hand more - it could be carrying on much more melodic content.
More later...
RH
this formula refers to Forum Relativity - not Quantum Relativity
with this equation : V- isibility equals C- uriosity multiplying F- eedback exponentially
a Theory that seems to only work on paper
here's one for you - puncuate this; it that is is it that is not is not is not that it it is
Kristofer Emerig said:
nope how bout 3 tries for a quarter nothing is missing except the puncuation
properly placed it'll make perfect sense RS
when I first saw and tried this, I thought it would be easy no one in the class got it right
but it was fun to watch the attempts on the blackboard as we all took a shot at it
NEXT
Kristofer Emerig said:
agreed, the left hand for the most part is static but that is the purpose. Have you forgotten what it
was to be a beginner? Training your hands to move and hit the correct notes without looking down
from the written music thus gaining the ability as 2nd nature to play more fluidly. Sure the piece could
be embellished and lengthened but that would defeat the purpose. (see headline) Thanks for the comments
and feedback RS
Kristofer Emerig said:
eh no paper lost and not much else happening there may be more than 1 solution
but the 'correct 1' WILL make the most sense
Kristofer Emerig said:
I will counterpoint with - what will sell more to the non- professional everyday wanna be ....in this
day and age ... Bach - to a small handful dreaming of Carnegie Hall or for the lighter, less interested
in the high-brow of music, weekend hobbyist ,( and there's got to be hundreds,) or what I'm trying to put together?I guess I should research music stores to verify general overall sales. I know, I'll sell it under a pen name ...
how about Ludwig Bachman ar-ar-ar
Kristofer Emerig said:
Yes, I knew that - you have Sheldonitis it's generally harmless but can be contagious.
and yes you have correctly puzzled it out very good Thanks for playing
Kristofer Emerig said: