My First Entirely Original Piece

     This is the first original song I created and I'm wondering what I can do to improve it and just how the song sounds to other people in general. I usually do remixes or recreations of other songs and I use a program called Mixcraft to make my music. Thanks for the help! ^^

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  • Its' very nice, although it could use a bit more variety. There was a spot or two where I expected a minor climax but the music continued with the same pattern. Still, sounds very nice, with those instruments, I could totally picture it in a hand held video game scene. keep it up.

  • Hi Jacob, I think this is very solid as a 'background '

    piece to something, but not as the main event.

    Perfect for a short ad or promotion, which is a big market.

    Best of luck to you,      RS

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