I've just started this piece, trying to go for a John Adamsy vibe, I've attached the MIDI file, although I have no idea how useful it will be!
Feedback please :) it's just a WIP so if it needs deleting and starting again, so be it. Thanks
NEW VERSION ATTACHED :)
I enjoyed this. It has dynamicism and some good melodies.
The piece sounds like it has life, but it needs a more proper ending. Right now, there's a cliffhanger and I don't feel that it properly concludes the piece.