Looking for some Feedback!

Hi! I created a fast paced song and would like some feedback. 

The song starts six seconds in. Please keep in mind that, as I am still in school, I am limited in budget and am almost 100% reliant on free VSTs. 

I don't think I have the structure in particular quite right, some melodies sometimes feel repetitive or like they appear at the wrong times. The ending bit also sounds kind of sudden as well.

Any advice is much appreciated!

Rat Race.mp3

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  • Definitely entertaining.  I like it.  The only way I would have found it more amusing is if you had morphed the instruments into a rock band with distorted guitars at the end. 

  • Great composition. A pleasure to my ears. Maybe that three chords repeats a little bit to much. Ending is nice. Good idea by Coston above.

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    Kjell

  • Thank you! Fun was definitely what I was going for. I will try the instrument morph later. 

    Em Coston said:

    Definitely entertaining.  I like it.  The only way I would have found it more amusing is if you had morphed the instruments into a rock band with distorted guitars at the end. 

    Looking for some Feedback!
    Hi! I created a fast paced song and would like some feedback.  The song starts six seconds in. Please keep in mind that, as I am still in school, I a…
  • I'm glad you liked it! Repetitiveness was something I was a bit worried about, but I had so many melody ideas for those three chords. Looking back, I probably should've omitted them in favour of some different things.

    Kjell Prytz said:

    Great composition. A pleasure to my ears. Maybe that three chords repeats a little bit to much. Ending is nice. Good idea by Coston above.

    Post more!

    Kjell

    Looking for some Feedback!
    Hi! I created a fast paced song and would like some feedback.  The song starts six seconds in. Please keep in mind that, as I am still in school, I a…
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