• This is extremely pretty and melancholic when it begins. I prefer the slower moving parts over later when things get ever so slightly quicker, but that's just my personal preference. This is a lovely track overall, thanks for uploading. :)
  • It was a good piece, but for me it was very unremarkable. I felt that what you are capable of was trying to come out, but it was covered or suppressed by a very clique sound for longing. This is unfortunate because there was some very good things in this piece. I can tell you know a lot about music and how to use harmonies and melodic structures very well and it shows in this piece, however I don't hear you enough in this piece.
    Another thing that I had issue with was I didn't feel that the different sections of the piece really came together. You have this longing sappy section in the beginning which is followed by a baroque-classical section and topped off with another longing sappy section. To me, that made the piece confusing. Each section was written very well, but they just didnt seem to go together.
    Overall, the piece was good, not great, but good. I would like to hear more of what you are capable of doing and more of your personality in your music next time.
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