I would appreciate to know how you "hear" this piece and whether in your opinion it is successful as a 1-minute piano piece.
Please keep in mind that the written score is an attempt to describe the piece in writing. However, the composition is what you can hear in the recording. To the extent that the score and the recording don't agree, it will be the score that needs to be fixed, and I would appreciate your help in fixing it. That said, I don't want to over-specify how every aspect of the piece should be played. The intention of annotating the score is to assist the interpreter, not to constrain the interpreter.
Thank you very much in advance for any comments on the piece (what you hear) and/or comments on how to improve the written score!