Little compositions (4)

I wanted to know what everyone thought of these little compositions I have made. Any feedback and opinions are appreciated!

Thank you!

1) https://musescore.com/user/3451546/scores/1022141

2) https://musescore.com/user/3451546/scores/1114941

3) https://musescore.com/user/3451546/scores/2124431

4) https://musescore.com/user/3451546/scores/2108981

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  • These are nicely crafted compositions. They're like two-part inventions. You establish themes, repeat them with variations, developing motifs of melody and rhythm.

    To be helpful to you, my criticism would be that you can draw a lot more out of the piano, by breaking away from two-voice counterpoint. The piano is capable of an enormous range of expression; with the solid foundation of tonal theory you already have, you can try working in more gesture and texture.

    My prescription is: listen to massive amounts of Beethoven!

  • Thank you, I'll be sure to do that!

    Ian Ring said:

    These are nicely crafted compositions. They're like two-part inventions. You establish themes, repeat them with variations, developing motifs of melody and rhythm.

    To be helpful to you, my criticism would be that you can draw a lot more out of the piano, by breaking away from two-voice counterpoint. The piano is capable of an enormous range of expression; with the solid foundation of tonal theory you already have, you can try working in more gesture and texture.

    My prescription is: listen to massive amounts of Beethoven!

    Little compositions (4)
    I wanted to know what everyone thought of these little compositions I have made. Any feedback and opinions are appreciated! Thank you! 1) https://mu…
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