hello friends,
this is my first post in this forum. i hoped to share new music that i just posted called "Life as it is" it is the first music in my page and i have added it here. I dedicated this music Tchaikovsky who is a major inspiration in my work. I pleasantly look forward to your opinions!
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Sherief
The beggining sounds like something I would expect to find playing at a circus, but it is good. When the strings come in, it sounds nice...I love the strings. Overall you have the waltz/big band thing going on. I like the part after that where you go into this space-pad/cello melody. During that you should try to make it "flourish" more. Try to develop a nice consistent melody. The build to the big bang at the end is too long, take some of it out. The ending is pretty epic.
It's a nice song, however it needs work.
Sean
sherief > Sean James DarcySeptember 7, 2009 at 1:52am
Thank you guys for your complement and criticism. dankk at 6 min that's firework thats not very well mixed in:)
Your music is very good and natural sounding. You are a natural composer. I'm interested in understanding the nuts and bolts of this work so that I can learn more myself. Any chance of sending me the midi file ?
Very impressive work Sherief! The part around the middle was simply brilliant, it really pictured some strong emotions in my eyes. Overall I love your classical style, especially since we live in a world that constantly seems to move to everything else apart from classical music when it comes to filmmusic.
One thing I'd remove would be the fireworks, I really loved the way you approached the ending but when I heard the sound FX, I thought it was some kind of noise as well. :)
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It's a nice song, however it needs work.
Sean
One thing I'd remove would be the fireworks, I really loved the way you approached the ending but when I heard the sound FX, I thought it was some kind of noise as well. :)
Thank you guys for your encouraging comments! next week i will edit out the fireworks and resubmit it. thank you again!
Otherwise, I've checked out your site and the myspace one... I am very impressed.
Hope to hear more of you, Ario.
thanks for listening! i was introduced to orchestral music in 2005 so it did take me a 4 years but i still feel behind.
And yes i do make a living off it :)
thanks again!