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  • Soothing.  It has a characteristic mood.  The tune reminds me

    a character but I am not an expert of American music.

    The piano part is well written.

    I do not know whether I am allowed to evaluate this work

    but humbly: It is a well done seamless relaxing work.

    Thank you.

  • Hi Brandon,

    This has some good things in it. I hear an interesting melody and the harmonic development seems workable. It's a bit on the heavy side, the piano has a lot BUM-bum-BUM-bum accented sounds which to my ear, weigh the piece down. I would suggest speeding it up a bit (maybe 5-10%) and lightening up on the piano might help the piece move along a little. Just a suggestion - thanks for posting!

    Gav

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