Just an idea

Hi all my first post, i just had this idea for a repetative cyclic piece it does not do much at present its the first draft, I would like to build it up to add more complexities.

Any oppinions on wether this could work? and any pointers.

Im new to composing and my theoretical knowldege is not too deep but I enjoy it very much.

Thank you

Si.

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  • " a repetative cyclic piece"
    could you explain it a bit more?
  • Yes sorry, it does not mean much, I wanted to write a simple piece of music that just loops with some airy sopprano, but I feel stuck with this and would like to do something more with it, I just wondered what other people thought, I,ve never written anything before and was looking for some thoughts from others, thanks.
  • The soprano sounds okay... I would just put a "bridge" inbetween the lower and higher notes, avoiding the contrast between the notes, by taking from the size of the leaps...

    I'm not even sure, if all notes can be sung by one person (even a solo-soprano!).

    The theme sounds cool to me... could be the background of an epic hip-hop arrangement ; ) ... due to it's "cyclic" nature, as you call it.

    In my opinion, the whole thing does not miss much, considering the style it is written in.

    Generally, I liked it.


    Ario.
  • Hi Si, I really like the piano, and the bass movements, though I am no expert but I think what Ario suggested is quite right as the soprano leaps between the lower and higher notes, avoiding contrasts. Very good though.
  • Thanks for your input, sorry it took me so long to get back, been away, I understand your comments and have left this particular piece for now with a view to going back and rewriting the voices.
    Thanks again

    Peter Maslyn said:
    Hi Si, I really like the piano, and the bass movements, though I am no expert but I think what Ario suggested is quite right as the soprano leaps between the lower and higher notes, avoiding contrasts. Very good though.
    Just an idea
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