• This is very pleasant sounding every step of the way. Yet, I don't feel a composition so much as a jam. Would have liked to hear a little more coherent melody, structure, contrast and a more definitive approach to an ending.

  • @Gav: Ok I understand what you are saying. Actually my idea was to create something new, basically creating a piece where the melody is something like a basic line, which can be modified by the interpreter….However I think that I will have a look at it once again and change the structure….Thank you for your comment!

  • Hi, Daniel...

    Pretty much what Gav said.  I was trying to put it into words, and Gav articulated it well.  I just wasn't sure where you were going with it. I like the "smoky" jazz feel, but I didn't feel melodically satisfied.


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