I am somewhat new at composing for live instruments. I've attached a very short piece I submitted for a competition. I'd like feedback about the orchestration and any technical flaws. I also had a question about dynamic markings. When one or two instruments are much louder than the other(s) should dynamic markings be adjusted accordingly. For example, the french horn is louder than the violin, so if the french horn is playing mezzo forte should the violin be playing forte. Thanks in advance for your patience and assistance. I'm still learning. Also, any other constructive comments on the piece are welcome.
REVISION: I replaced the C score with the transposed score.