Help with composition?

A friend and I have recently been working on a project about a song I wrote called Ethereal Glow. We are at something of a finished state, but we both agree that there is still something missing. We're really enthusiastic to finish this project, so if anybody has any suggestions or feedback we'd really love to hear it.

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  • Hi PI511,

    Do you have any visualizations? Are you shooting for atmospherics, emo, characterizations?  Contrast? What would the music video be ;) Glad to offer creative suggestions. The piece sounds little 'stuck' in conventional diatonic and rhythmic structure.

    Art

     

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